Berke Arbour (NPC)
Character Info:Character Name: Berke ArbourAge: 79 but looks to be 35Gender: MaleSexual Orientation: StraightSpecies: Vampire- LamiaRealm: Present NYPersonality: Nothing angers Berke more than being...
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Not bad, aside from a few minor typos and grammatical errors. I will say a pending first acceptance, but see what another admin might have to say. Looking good though!
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Er, you're missing a very key factor of his history...the daughter. Where did she come from?
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Um, darling, you'd be the only one playing this charater. O.ONot a lot of people would have a use for him outside his daughters.
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What I'm saying is that I don't want any referencfes between the girls. You know, like "Haven't I seen you somewhere before?" or "You know, there's a <insert vampire or witch here> that looks...
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